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Post by jarper on Jan 7, 2007 19:43:38 GMT -5
Visiting Quartly? Please don't kill pink unicorns (he's their guest zombie).
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Post by Sir Fred of Etruria on Jan 8, 2007 20:07:40 GMT -5
Murray Jay Suskind Ridleybank Resistance Front the red guard's coming
Brain rotted zombies misunderstood, not evil they bring you barhah
Barrh!ghab.az ara b.aahn Ah mah gharb. H!n zhah zb.rh!!b. Zah bangbang man bad
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Post by jarper on Jan 8, 2007 22:26:48 GMT -5
Hey, VonLuthius! I heard the Gingerbread Men 'Caded Ridleybank?
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Post by Prisonner Of Today on Jan 9, 2007 6:48:56 GMT -5
Barrh!ghab.az ara b.aahn Ah mah gharb. H!n zhah zb.rh!!b. Zah bangbang man bad Looks like you're making progess with that language barrier!
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Post by yoshinaka on Jan 9, 2007 16:26:31 GMT -5
聞こえるや。ゾンビーの鳴り。積み直せ! I hear it! The zombie's cry. Reload! 友の脳くさってるんだ。さらば、友。 My friend's brain is rotten. Goodbye, friend.
On the subject of 5-7-5 vs. 7-5-7, there's no form that I know of that's 7-5-7, but it is acceptable to bend the rules and have haiku that are 5-8-5 or 5-7-6. And technically, kigo are necessary for a haiku to actually be a haiku, but so are a lot of things that almost no one pays attention to anymore, and haiku started out as an iconoclastic, chaotic form anyway, so I say pretty much anything goes.
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Post by asshole doctor™ on Jan 9, 2007 16:36:28 GMT -5
right and all that is stated on the wiki URL I posted. but basiclly what your saying is DHG is wrong!
also please don't double post use the shiny modify button
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Post by yoshinaka on Jan 9, 2007 17:22:13 GMT -5
I tried, but then everything turned into number strings.
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Post by asshole doctor™ on Jan 9, 2007 18:07:42 GMT -5
yet the offending. post! is still there?why? why? delete double post.
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Post by Sir Fred of Etruria on Jan 9, 2007 18:22:00 GMT -5
Konitchi Wa Yoshinaka-san ! I am honored by your authentic haiku. Could you kindly explain the other requirements for a haiku ? In america they only tell us the 5-7-5 requirements...
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Post by jarper on Jan 9, 2007 19:01:23 GMT -5
"But I'm talkin' 'bout Sir Fred of Etruria.." "Then we can dig it!"
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Post by yoshinaka on Jan 9, 2007 19:22:48 GMT -5
Fred, my haiku weren't particularly authentic, they just happened to be in Japanese (not necessarily good Japanese, either; I can speak passably well about simple topics but I still get a lot of things wrong). An "authentic" haiku (I put the term in quotes because there are various schools of haiku composition, all with different rules, and there's plenty of perfectly good haiku that breaks those rules) would follow the labyrinthine rules of composition found in one of the huge haiku style manuals, which stipulate which words are and aren't acceptable, which words can only be used in certain seasons, which words require other words to be used in the same poem, etc. etc. etc. The only two rules most people worry about are the 5-7-5 rule (which is sometimes broken, even by the masters) and the "make it have something to do with the seasons or nature or something," which is also frequently broken.
sexualharrison: Like snowfall in spring, my double post fades away. ...Unless I screwed up.
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Post by Sir Fred of Etruria on Jan 9, 2007 23:38:23 GMT -5
I never realized it was such an overly specific poetry form. Like a concise poem in 17 syllables isn't hard enough, the japanese made even more specifications !
authentic haiku must obey five-seven-five and mention nature
zombies love the sun they zang and dahnz all summer to share the barhah
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Post by Gore Girl on Jan 10, 2007 0:04:14 GMT -5
zombies love the sun they zang and dahnz all summer to share the barhah We zahnz. We don't have "d" in the vocabulary yet. ;D
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Post by asshole doctor™ on Jan 10, 2007 0:28:44 GMT -5
fred check the wiki. it explains everything. scroll up i have the url at the top of this thread. i tried to make it simple for everyone. so i stuck to the basics. i wanted everyone to try and write some. it's good for the soul...
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Post by Tovarisch Khrushchev on Jan 10, 2007 0:33:03 GMT -5
Like fresh rotten leaves Zombies in all directions Welcome to the suck
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