Post by someguy5031 on Jul 24, 2007 21:22:25 GMT -5
while that is humorous: A. Bob, Cj and Timothy's story was much more interesting so... B. Get to the point with Christian or make his character alot bigger, more interesting (or surround him with interesting people), it dosent seem to be as lighthearted as the previous arc. C. Make fun of groups in general Trenchcoaters, Fire Fighters, Zombie restauraunt owners, that way people can relate more to it rather than just one person. The more you can get people to relate to the comic, the funnier its gonna be, even if it gets weird.
Either way its preety funny and i like your work (The art and story)
Edit: Bigger locations! not just a tiny club that happens to be in the way. put the characters near large landmarks such as Caiger Mall or Fort Creedy. Make fun of items within the game, such as unconstitutional ways of using them, Crucifixes is a joke waiting to be made fun of.
Sorry to be the only one to criticize you but, you were overdue
Either way its preety funny and i like your work (The art and story)
Edit: Bigger locations! not just a tiny club that happens to be in the way. put the characters near large landmarks such as Caiger Mall or Fort Creedy. Make fun of items within the game, such as unconstitutional ways of using them, Crucifixes is a joke waiting to be made fun of.
Sorry to be the only one to criticize you but, you were overdue