Post by Big J on Jul 26, 2007 21:08:09 GMT -5
someguy5031 said:
while that is humorous: A. Bob, Cj and Timothy's story was much more interesting so... B. Get to the point with Christian or make his character alot bigger, more interesting (or surround him with interesting people), it dosent seem to be as lighthearted as the previous arc. C. Make fun of groups in general Trenchcoaters, Fire Fighters, Zombie restauraunt owners, that way people can relate more to it rather than just one person. The more you can get people to relate to the comic, the funnier its gonna be, even if it gets weird.Either way its preety funny and i like your work (The art and story)
Edit: Bigger locations! not just a tiny club that happens to be in the way. put the characters near large landmarks such as Caiger Mall or Fort Creedy. Make fun of items within the game, such as unconstitutional ways of using them, Crucifixes is a joke waiting to be made fun of.
Sorry to be the only one to criticize you but, you were overdue
As for the new arc, I have gotten mixed reviews on it. Some people like it more, some people less. it is less lighthearted, and less punchline oriented. As planned. But, I believe my comic has enough room for both types of stories. I am writing my comic for a broad group of readers, not one group of survivors or one group of zombies. But for serious and funny. For survivors and zombies.
As for getting to the point, well, if I just jump to the end it won't be worth it. Christian's story has its place and time. Sorry, not gonna arm wrestle it into an ending just yet.
Game locations will be referenced in comic. I chose Dunell Hills for the first one because of its proximity to my fictitious 'burb of Hampton. It made sense to me as a writer. But, just like with cameos, I will use them where and when they make sense. No other way to do it, in my opinion.
I think in some ways you and i are on the same page, we agree certain things should end up in the comic. I, however, am looking 50-60-120-
strips in the future, not now. In The Now, I'm just working on what's in front of me. This story. This strip. This panel of inking. And that's all I can ever promise. Sorry if that's not enough.Thanks for the input. J.
